This was incredibly useful - a lot more useful than a paragraph written at the bottom, which summarises the work as a whole - this is a chance to verbally get feedback for each project.
Eye Spy:
- Background work needs to compensate for outcomes - more background work and experimentation to support a short ident.
- Not to dumb down my ideas due to my technical ability, my digital work is growing in confidence but ideas could be more developed.
- Storyboard whole idea - produce what I can.
- Research and concept could be broader - historical background of CCTV.
Your 4:
- Audience not understood.
- Better clarity of understanding.
Serendipity:
- Concept/name interesting.
- Need to understand audience better.
- Not suitable for hospital - legibility.
We didn't discuss my other briefs but these were the most important ones where I think the feedback would benefit me more.
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